I waited for the bus

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29/3/2019
  
I waited for the bus 

I waited for the bus in the rain

This morning I waited for the bus in the rain 

This morning i waited for the bus in the rain on the side of the road 

This morning i waited in the rain for the bus on the side of the road shivering in the cold

This morning i waited in the rain for the bus on the side of the road shivering in the cold because my bus was late  

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