WALT: Add detail to our sentences to give detail to the reader
29/3/2019
I waited for the bus
I waited for the bus in the rain
This morning I waited for the bus in the rain
This morning i waited for the bus in the rain on the side of the road
This morning i waited in the rain for the bus on the side of the road shivering in the cold
This morning i waited in the rain for the bus on the side of the road shivering in the cold because my bus was late
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