Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 8 November 2019

story starter

On tuesday we had to write what he was doing in the cold and what was he thinking.It was really fun what he was doing and writing.

Friday, 2 November 2018

The tail of Despereaux

This team we have been reading  the tail of Despereaux. Our teachers asked us to write what we think what will happened next.

This is the sentence she gave us:
The beating of the drum let them know that an important decision would be made one that affected the safety and well-being of the entire mouse community...


This is what I wrote:
You can hear the chicken drum sticks beating faster and faster on the drum kit.


You could hear desperado little heart beating faster and faster he knew something was going to happen, something bad.
He followed the sound that lead him to the mouse community and to his father and mother.


When despereaux went in the room they were all staring at him because he broke the mouse law.


He knew that he had to go down to the rats in the dark cold and wet Dungeon.











                                                                     





 




Monday, 2 July 2018

dairy entry

Dear dairy

Today it was a boring day like usual everybody keep staring at me. So I painted bananas after that I watched funny cartoons on my old tv. I wonder if i am going to get another gorilla friend and i wonder when i am going  to be free. I feel bored, lonely and sad. It is so unfair i am missing home in the jungle . I wonder when i am going home.

By Mackenzie

Thursday, 12 April 2018

ANZAC POEM

This week we have been learning about ANZAC day

Friday, 6 April 2018

Mackenzie metaphor poem


This is my metaphor poem about me. I really liked making the poem.