Friday 6 April 2018

Mackenzie metaphor poem


This is my metaphor poem about me. I really liked making the poem.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mackenzie my name is Stevii I go to Wainui Beach School In Gisborne. I like your metaphor because you explained what you are really well and I also like your colour choice it is very colourful. My favorite metaphor is (Mackenzie is a beane very soft inside it's like a soft marshmallow)

    From Stevii

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